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paper bag spray on |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you did the spray on hello high tan kind of candy with freckles and a hand shake kind of kiss I didn't look at your eyes I knew how deep they would go and that the drowning was one way with no return from wanting to but you said something clever that ruined my presentation something about paper bag hearts that anyone can kick through if they are willing to do the ruin and will keep the pretty pieces after _________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a lesson of awareness so brilliantly written across the heavens of time...astute and thought provoking... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j, thanks lady!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You know, the title just charmed me and the poem gripped me. Well, you already know I am a fan - but did you know that I like paper over plastic? Seriously, I look forward to reading your poetry every morning. Thank you. az |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, thank you and I like paper too. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
there you go again!!!! Don't stop..... kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel, my favorite words, thank you ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' it had to be pretty clever to ruin your presentation... good one |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, I knew she was lyin when I saw her lips move, but I pretended to listen anyway...love is deaf yes? thanks hon |
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