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Sunshine
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0 posted 2006-11-16 11:15 PM







Tall Pear

Large beauty reigning
Red and gold Chinese wind song
Strong leaves still holding

Quiet graceful tones
Awaiting next green promise
Longevity pledged

Crisping leaves singing
Tall pear’s naked abundance
Living tomorrow


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© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-11-16 11:21 PM


what a fine description!
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2 posted 2006-11-17 02:22 AM


Lovely and so graceful.

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3 posted 2006-11-17 08:47 AM


oh I have so missed reading you...Kari, this was stunningly penetrating.  


Martie
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4 posted 2006-11-17 10:13 AM


Sissie....how lovely to see color through glass this way...gives a whole new meaning to the word autumn.  
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5 posted 2006-11-17 10:19 AM


Autumn has never appeared more lovely ~ or with more promise.

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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6 posted 2006-11-17 11:39 AM


ms sun, I have a chevy tree outside my window..(car parts hanging from branches
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7 posted 2006-11-17 11:50 AM


Beautifully done Sunshine!

Oh, to have such a vivid a grasp of blend!

Thank you for sharing....

Omnia vincit amor

TP

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8 posted 2006-11-17 11:59 AM


Karilea~
Such a graceful Senryu-stringing of beauty~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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