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Pressie
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0 posted 2006-11-16 01:28 PM



  

~ The Harley Ride ~

The wind is blowing a glorious gale,
Goose bumps are dancing and drinking strong ale,
Happiness is smiling an awesome mile wide,
The heart is pole vaulting with ecstatic pride,
Laughter is echoing from deep down inside,
The reflection of a friend, securely, near by,
And always the roaring of the engine's reply.

Touching the artistic expression of God's creation,
Diving into the strokes on the canvas of the nation:
A sight seeing, majestic, Three-D animation;
The orange globe setting, entices fascination,
A bright full moon draws an eerie-infatuation;
Up and down the mountains and valleys,
From east to west, coast to coast rallies.

Bouquets of flowers, become a treasure trove
Of puppy breath mornings, inhaled through the nose.
Hours of riding make an aching butt scold,
But - soft, sensual, pillowing never gets old,
As sweet thing, inclining, takes a tight hold,
And heart pounding accelerating,
Declares the adventurous soul bold!

Mother nature is boasting exhilarating forces.
Cavalry prances in formation as warrior horses,
Snorting in preparation for the colossal attack;
Absolutely no contemplation of a fall back;
The senses amplified in an adrenalin flood,
Envisioning 'The Charge of the Light Brigade'
On this magnificent, mighty-lunging, stud!



Omnia vincit amor

TP

[This message has been edited by Pressie (11-16-2006 04:39 PM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-11-16 02:01 PM


*smiling here*  Awesome writing, enjoyed the ride friend Pressie.  Was just at the Harley shop this weekend checking out the scenery.  Welcome to Passions, enjoyed your words here.   COOL!

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

Pressie
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2 posted 2006-11-16 02:31 PM


Gentle Spirit,

Your words are too kind.  

The pic was taken in the shadow of the Beartooth Mountain Range this past September. Breathtakingly beautiful country! The only thing better, would have been a gentile spirit riding along with me.

Omnia vincit amor

TP

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3 posted 2006-11-16 02:55 PM


Friend Pressie, there is NOTHING like an early morning ride on the back of a Harley to greet the new dawn day.  Truly enjoyed this, and your response.
The Lady
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4 posted 2006-11-16 03:09 PM




puppy breath mornings
and an aching butt sound great to me
Pressie

enjoyed this so much...


Pressie
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5 posted 2006-11-16 03:30 PM


Gentle Spirit.....ditto on the early morning rides!!


Pressie
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6 posted 2006-11-16 03:36 PM


The Lady ...lol...I'm very happy to see that there are some women in life who can enjoy themselves on the back of a Harley.

Sadly... my last significant... didn't.

Apropos, thanks for the encouraging comments on the write.

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7 posted 2006-11-16 04:19 PM


Sounds like an awesome ride.....an awesome feeling.....


Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-11-16 04:42 PM


friend pressie

scooter tin and a sixpack of highway are the best side of any riding companion..enjoyed your putt note

Pressie
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9 posted 2006-11-16 04:43 PM


Angel4aKing,

Riding a Harley is ineffable, but I like to try anyway.

Thanks for reading my write.

See you on the canvas!

Pressie
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10 posted 2006-11-16 04:48 PM


"scooter tin and a sixpack of highway are the best side of any riding companion"

You know....Dark Stranger.

Love your write!

Makes me want to go crank the Heritage right now.


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11 posted 2006-11-20 07:44 PM


Oooh, how did I miss this one?!! Awesome words and beautiful pic. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

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12 posted 2006-11-20 08:16 PM


you sure described it well and I do love that picture!
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13 posted 2006-11-20 08:18 PM



Sir, if the glove fits,
sit on it.

And that is said with
the best respect...

and in kind.



Ride on!


Pressie
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14 posted 2006-11-20 08:58 PM


Chris,

Your making my day!

Thank you for commenting on my poem.

ps You know that words will always fall short of   the ultimate experience - the ride itself, but we try anyway.    

Thanks for the kind words!    

"Sir, if the glove fits,
sit on it."

I am most honored by your thoughts Sunshine!
There is a well known acronym KISS that I try to keep in mind when I write.

nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2006-11-21 06:15 AM


I rode once~~ so very long ago~~

but I still remember...

M

Pressie
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16 posted 2006-11-21 09:49 AM


nakdthoughts,

I am glad the piece rustled a memory.

Thanks for commenting my poem!

Martie
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17 posted 2006-11-21 04:57 PM


"Diving into the strokes on the canvas"  And you did that with this poem....I felt the exhilaration...I think my hair caught the wind...oops, was wearing a helmit..guess not.  Anyway, I enjoyed!!
Pressie
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18 posted 2006-11-21 05:43 PM


"Diving into the strokes on the canvas"  And you did that with this poem....I felt the exhilaration...I think my hair caught the wind...oops, was wearing a helmit..guess not."

lol....thanks for joining us on the ride Martie!

It's a blast for sure!

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19 posted 2006-11-21 10:13 PM


Touching the artistic expression of God's creation,
Diving into the strokes on the canvas of the nation:
A sight seeing, majestic, Three-D animation;
The orange globe setting, entices fascination,
A bright full moon draws an eerie-infatuation;
Up and down the mountains and valleys,
From east to west, coast to coast rallies.

Sigi Pressie it makes one feel as if they are there beside you feeling the wind caress,seeing the glories of our Mother Earth go rushing by.Such a wonderful way to write!


  granny!

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20 posted 2006-11-21 10:19 PM


Wonderful Pressie!
You took me there...I rode behind you.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

Pressie
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21 posted 2006-11-21 10:28 PM


granny, You are such a great story teller, I am honored by your words.

Thank you for the sweet response nancy!

Carpe diem

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