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sky skin jagged |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were accidental occasional again wearing some sunset at the window like spray on tan from the inside looking through the cellophane we still don't talk much before just put on dave matthews loud and crash into each other too proud to say ouch at times til after when the swelling shows and we laugh at each other's excuses and do little things gentle slow touching edges just enough for eyes to get that, yes I want to look and we both reach for the cd player at the same time hurrying to paint the round room with louder before we strip the walls to sky skin ______________ daark |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn now this one hit home |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The round room is always so soothing to the savage senses. Much enjoyed this side of you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dixie, I love your damn's thanks _____________ ms gs, thank you lady friend |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' got a ladyache here ouch! I like this... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, oh please let me rub it better, thanks hon |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I have been here....kind of kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
angel' perhaps that is where we met some tomorrow ago? thanks |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
WOW! ...ineffable. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend pressie, thanks guy! |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Dark Stranger you do have a way of mastering words sir. Glad I caught this one. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend amber, thank you, welcome back |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Well, either the stove is turned up too high or this is one hot poem. Heat is nice as some of you know I have been freezing to death lately. Thanks for warming me up - az |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, a fuzzy warm electric thank you to you |
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