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smile! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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What’s in a smile?! If I could write... a thousand ‘perfect’ poems, I’d pen them all...for you! If I had finest words... for a million special thoughts, I’d speak them all...for you! If I had grandest riches... of a billion hidden worlds, I’d spend them all...for you! Just...to see you smile!..... And, if I could catch one chance... To slip back time-cog’s purpose, for all that I could ever wish... I’d sacrifice it all.... Just...to see that smile again! [I will refrain from posting a name under the title of this poem to avoid any embarrassment to the ‘inspiration’] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very beautiful and heartfelt I'm sure the inpiration would be flattered |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I'm sure you do all these things with pizzaz... Very sweetly written.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Words are but the breath of sigh You've yet to pass the needles eye. Enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bruce....Sweetly wonderful a smile is catching...catch mine!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The source of your inspiration will most assuredly will be smiling after reading this smile of a caring poem. A smile begets a smile.  Sending one to each of you! EA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, indeed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Something tells me they have already figured it out... I would do the same, but I think I would reserve it for someone much closer to me.. Perhaps a parent, long dead...sorely missed. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
so beautiful Bruce both thought and poem |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you all!! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
There are many smiles I would like to see again....this is beautiful!!!! kingsangel |
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Benji Glaab Junior Member
since 2006-08-28
Posts 12Ontario/B.C Canada |
Smiles are contagious don't worry be happy |
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Benji Glaab Junior Member
since 2006-08-28
Posts 12Ontario/B.C Canada |
Smiles are contagious don't worry be happy |
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Distortia New Member
since 2006-11-16
Posts 5 |
I understand the wants expressed in this poem, no matter the inspiration, wanting to see another smile is a permeation of your souls will. You my friend are a positive individual. Perceptions of reality are bending as truth seeps into the masses. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Anyone who could have inspired this could not possibly be embarrassed! These are such very sweet words, Mr. Bruce! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Beautifully written! Omnia vincit amor |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ A smile seems such a simple thing to want to see on a face ... it is a gift of great importance to both the giver and the receiver~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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