Open Poetry #39 |
Catch as catch can |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Catch as Catch can When phantoms fill the mind with lush And moonlight paints a silver brush A feather tilts the teeter board And weighs upon the memory stored It presses mind into the night To see the other side in light Beyond the psyche of the will To dip a cup desires fill But weight can be a spirits yaw And bring the teeter board to floor To catch you in the ebb of tide And stay your heart nowhere to hide Within the chaos of the grime There seems no teeter board for time It stays the center of the board And up and down is no reward It stays the access of the core And always this forevermore |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy I really enjoyed the images...especially "moonlight paints a silver brush"...well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio LOL Did you get any paint on you? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I always catch what you write as often as I can |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper LOL I know you do, I know you do. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love reading your teeter totter thoughts! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T-eeter! May your teeter never totter and be perfectly balanced on a fulcrum of happiness! EA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...a feather weighs as much as a thought and tips the scale alot. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun Thank you dear. Earth Angel That would be nice. Martie I know, I know. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Loved it! Your writing flows so smoothly, and with such breath. Thanks for sharing! Omnia vincit amor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pressie I thank you for the read and comment. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and forevermore I love your work Sir Sy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no matter what the theme...you always make me dance in my chair when I read what fine meter! Have a great day Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady And forever I love your replies. passing, You are a dear, may your day be a pleasant one. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I read that time changes us constantly, you only get better.... wonderful read...enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ So glad to see you back. |
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