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. . . Woman . . . in rictameter
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. . . Woman . . . in rictameter |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
woman God’s gift to man lovely cleaving partner soft antithesis of manhood designed to revivify, procreate, nurture and love unselfishly sanctuary from harm grandest cohort woman Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In one word: she is a miracle ... The good thing is that you seem sincerely aware of this miracle. This is a very lovely tribute. And when the "antithesis" is overcome and there is the awareness of being ONE, then the gift is reciprocal indeed. Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now this...this is perfection! Oooh popping it into my library. Makes me feel all warm and womanly. Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Margherita ~ Yes, that is why the second line exists. We are not complete without each other. That is, man and woman compliment each other. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nancy ~ Aw shucks, now you've gone and done it... I'll never get the toe of my boot outta this dust! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
To me...this was a masterful 'rictameter' 'write'...a new 'poetic horizon' is set by this....toward which I quest! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Thought. It takes wondering man unveiling the delight reveling in the special time marking the moments of such rare design bringing magic at finger's tip candlelight, wine, roses; all the while, you knew this thought. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bruce ~ I'm speechless ... and if you speak to just about anybody here (except Toerag) you'll find that's very seldom the case. Thank you Decaflame ~ On a scale of 1 to 10 you are at least a fifteen Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, you sweet-talker you!!  hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Chris ~ You ARE a sweetheart Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very beautiful write |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I did made rictameter once and it didn't taste very good...this one is delicious! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
TD ~ Many heartfelt thanx Martie ~ It's a simple recipe, really. Leave in oven with muse at 98.6 degrees for about 8 hours Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
kinda makes you feel all soft and gooey and happy to be a woman 'loper I love it |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Another smile lit my face Thank you for placing it here. A |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad this one came back up |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Kate ~ ... and I just know you are ALL woman Alison ~ You know, I do love a beautiful smile Dixie ~ ... and I'm glad you saw it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (11-16-2006 10:55 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This write makes the woman/child of me smile so very much Loper. Warm and wonderful write.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Loper~ YA DID IT !!! Grand it is~ Couldn't help but *smile* at "lovely cleaving partner"  OH ... that's CLEAVING ... not cleavage ! Aren't they fun done in this format ? *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
thank you for viewing a marvelous better half as is the other half... hugs Lee J. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Brilliant writing, dearest 'loper! I can usually reply poetically, but this time? my mouth is too busy smiling to form words that fit... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Gentle One ~ I'm glad you enjoyed Marge ~ Why do you do this to me lovely lady  Lee ~ It is SO good to have you back  Kacy ~ I'll take what I can get Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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