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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-11-14 01:14 PM

woman
God’s gift to man
lovely cleaving partner
soft antithesis of manhood
designed to revivify, procreate,
nurture and love unselfishly
sanctuary from harm
grandest cohort
woman

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-11-14 01:34 PM

In one word: she is a miracle ...

The good thing is that you seem sincerely aware of this miracle. This is a very lovely tribute.

And when the "antithesis" is overcome and there is the awareness of being ONE, then the gift is reciprocal indeed.

Love,
Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-11-14 01:40 PM

Now this...this is perfection!
Oooh popping it into my library.
Makes me feel all warm and womanly.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-11-14 01:41 PM

Margherita ~
Yes, that is why the second line exists. We are not complete without each other. That is, man and woman compliment each other.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-11-14 01:42 PM

Nancy ~
Aw shucks, now you've gone and done it...
I'll never get the toe of my boot outta this dust!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2006-11-14 01:45 PM

To me...this was a masterful 'rictameter'
'write'...a new 'poetic horizon' is set by this....toward which I quest!

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

6 posted 2006-11-14 01:46 PM

Thought.
It takes
wondering man
unveiling the delight
reveling in the special time
marking the moments of such rare design
bringing magic at finger's tip
candlelight, wine, roses;
all the while, you
knew this
thought.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2006-11-14 02:03 PM

Bruce ~
I'm speechless ... and if you speak to just about anybody here (except Toerag) you'll find that's very seldom the case.
Thank you

Decaflame ~
On a scale of 1 to 10 you are at least a fifteen

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2006-11-14 02:29 PM

Oh, you sweet-talker you!!

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2006-11-14 04:01 PM

Chris ~
You ARE a sweetheart

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2006-11-14 04:56 PM

Very beautiful write

Martie

Moderator

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California

11 posted 2006-11-14 05:24 PM

I did made rictameter once and it didn't taste very good...this one is delicious!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2006-11-14 06:01 PM

TD ~
Many heartfelt thanx

Martie ~
It's a simple recipe, really. Leave in oven with muse at 98.6 degrees for about 8 hours

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

13 posted 2006-11-14 11:36 PM

kinda makes you feel all soft
and gooey
and happy to be a woman
'loper
I love it

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

14 posted 2006-11-16 01:06 AM

Another smile lit my face
Thank you for placing it here.

A

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2006-11-16 07:37 AM

glad this one came back up

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2006-11-16 09:56 AM

Kate ~
... and I just know you are ALL woman

Alison ~
You know, I do love a beautiful smile

Dixie ~
... and I'm glad you saw it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (11-16-2006 10:55 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

17 posted 2006-11-16 10:45 AM

This write makes the woman/child of me smile so very much Loper. Warm and wonderful write.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

18 posted 2006-11-16 11:00 AM

Loper~
YA DID IT !!!

Grand it is~

Couldn't help but *smile* at "lovely cleaving partner"
OH ... that's CLEAVING ... not cleavage !

Aren't they fun done in this format ?

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

19 posted 2006-11-16 11:56 AM

thank you for viewing a marvelous better half as is the other half...

hugs
Lee J.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

20 posted 2006-11-16 12:07 PM

Brilliant writing, dearest 'loper!
I can usually reply poetically,
but this time?
my mouth
is too busy
smiling
to form words
that fit...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

21 posted 2006-11-16 01:12 PM

Gentle One ~
I'm glad you enjoyed

Marge ~
Why do you do this to me lovely lady

Lee ~
It is SO good to have you back

Kacy ~
I'll take what I can get

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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