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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-11-15 07:21 AM


some mornings they put occasional
on different sidewalks
and as usual you would be there

and I would be here
leaving yesterday
at different times

arriving at today
together accidently
double parked in red zones

just footsteps make music enough
for lovers to want to dance
and you say you recognize

that song from before
but it was played too fast then
seems slower now

more like something you could wear
or dress me up in
while we wait at intersections

for the stale lights to change


______________

daark


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-15 07:35 AM


much enjoyed the traffic this morning
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-11-15 07:40 AM



incidental accidents
make for some good
mornings...


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-11-15 07:47 AM


ms dixie, thanks for the stop light wave

___________

ms sun, thanks lady friend for copping a read

Midnitesun
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4 posted 2006-11-15 10:47 AM


leaving yesterday...
yes, the stop light
down the road
the one I ran through
the 'blind intersection'
I just now noticed

you always
jog memories

Martie
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5 posted 2006-11-15 10:55 AM


DS  I'll bet you sing with the radio while driving.  
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-11-15 10:59 AM


ms midnite, thank you for slowing a bit
when you went by
and for smiling

_____________

ms martie, I put it between stations and get a blend of old rock and roll and mexican music...that way my sing along is always accurate, thanks hon

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2006-11-15 04:44 PM


this fits like second skin baby, oh sooo smooth...  
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-11-15 06:39 PM


ms gs, thanks ms
Cloud 9
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9 posted 2006-11-15 06:47 PM


just peeking in here...

love this.

The Lady
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10 posted 2006-11-16 12:40 PM



doesn't even take footstep music
for some lovers to dance
Stranger darlin'

nice

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2006-11-16 07:14 AM


sexy 9 thanks for the wave

_____________

ladyone, we make music just with our whispers, thanks lady

LeeJ
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12 posted 2006-11-16 12:31 PM


I loved this
exceptional write
I see your still waving a brilliant banner D.

Hugs Lee J.

Pressie
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13 posted 2006-11-16 02:42 PM


"some mornings they put occasional
on different sidewalks
and as usual you would be there"

Wonderfully written.

Omnia vincit amor

TP

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2006-11-16 04:37 PM


ms lee j,  ..have missed your weaves of smile and thoughts, thank you


______________

friend pressie thank you for the touch here

Angel4aKing
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15 posted 2006-11-16 05:10 PM


I seem to be at an intersection of red lights myself....I hope they change to green soon.....take care, KA

kingsangel

Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2006-11-16 05:34 PM


angelone, being color blind is my blessing on this...I just run em all red or green
..enjoyed this

amberhues
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17 posted 2006-11-16 05:44 PM


I am drawn to your words Stranger.  There is an intoxicating quality to them.  
Dark Stranger
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18 posted 2006-11-16 06:19 PM


ms amber, thanks to you..sip as you wish and let me be the designated driver if needed.
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