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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-11-15 04:23 AM

Many Kisses, Many Tears

Into the collective stream
Of babbling soft waters
At interchange between
Eyes open and eyes closed
There flows, against the rocks
Bruised by times gone by

For in this combative scene
Though mighty and thick skinned
Water wins its passage, by integrity
Past the hard hearted or headed
Wearing down all resistance
Quietly, to never succumb

Giving no thought to frenzy
Leaving no harsh indelible mark
Simply flowing, in laughter
Along a predetermined course
Into the collective stream
Of babbling soft waters

Copyright Kkh 11/14/06

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-11-15 07:30 AM

what a write!

I'll be thinking about this all day

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-11-15 07:37 AM

Water wins its passage, by integrity
Past the hard hearted or headed
Wearing down all resistance
Quietly, to never succumb

~*~

It just flows its course,
and only God knows when to
alter its destination.

Well done, dear!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2006-11-15 09:57 AM

I could not improve upon the comment by 'passing shadows'about:
"Many Kisses, Many Tears"... I would just add: I'll be thinking about this all LIFE!:

"Giving no thought to frenzy
Leaving no.....indelible mark
Simply flowing, in laughter
Along a predetermined course
Into the collective stream"

Wow! ('weak' comment...but my words fail!)

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-11-15 11:13 AM

TD....The weight of water is the sureness of its passage and the lovely thing it does to the edges of rocks. I loved this!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2006-11-15 11:25 AM

I love your analogic use of water

purrfect

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2006-11-15 05:05 PM

Yes, a commodity that would certainly put
a dent in our lives were it taken away.

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

7 posted 2006-11-15 10:34 PM

beautiful and sad..let me add my tears to the waters........

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-11-16 12:06 PM

"Simply flowing, in laughter
Along a predetermined course
Into the collective stream
Of babbling soft waters

beautiful TD...

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