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bayou knows (charcoal man and his lady)
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bayou knows (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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wait ‘n see hangs in thick air over bayou sliver moon hides herself behind shakin’ leaves loblolly pines peek at silent house ouaouaron makes big croak tellin' tales herb saint day lilies give up secret scent bayou knows what happens tonight charcoal man slides long legs from dream sheets eyes drink of lady shadow hair sleepin' on pillow half moon fingers folded under silk cheek feel of soft shoulders under his arm already missed charcoal man looks where p'tit boug sleeps run and play tucked away for night little feet ready to leave bed soon as sunpeek t'char mon fils charcoal man tastes words on tongue my son folds wilted calypso blossom into small brown hand all I got mon fils charcoal man takes Panama from nail slips screen door open easy like slides polished feet off porch lady stirs dream smells cigar shadow hair spreads lookin’ for her man p'tit boug crushes calypso in fingers pitches aroma too old ouaouaron quiet herb saint day lilies pull back scent bayou listenin’ to gone |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You make me silent inside as I absorb the beauty of your words and the tale you weave. Love, Alison |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
charcoal man slides long legs from dream sheets eyes drink of lady shadow hair sleepin' on pillow half moon fingers folded under silk cheek feel of soft shoulders under his arm already missed your writes never fail to... Well, they just never fail. hugs, cheye xx |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, porch foot tokin a stogie, lady otta take up the dark end habit with her soot man? enjoyed you ms |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wish I could write like this whew...very capturing! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Creatures of the bayou four and two legged make for good reading... anytime.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What flavor! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aha! The southern saga continues ~ and to my utmost delight! You certainly are skilled at creating an atmosphere! I enjoy swimming your sultry seas of stirring sentiments. Magnolia Love, Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...you paint me now with eyes a wonder at the capture of these words |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
oh, my |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I find I sit for several minutes after I read these.. absorbing the story and not wanting them to ever end. Wish I could write like this, seemingly effortlessly. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Great to see this continuing. Look forward to them. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Alison thank you so much I’m glad you enjoy their tale love to you, Kate thank you kindly cheye Stranger darlin’ gone is gone not tokin a stogie devil… thank you thank you Dixie creatures of the bayou four and two legged won’t leave me alone Karilea I know you understand thank you  thank you TD Magnolia Love to you too Linda angel thank you thank you sweet Martie Sandra charcoal man and his lady are happy you dropped by… thank you so much Nancy I just take the dictation Thank you Steve |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Kate, how I love these  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kate~ *sigh* ... this in spantacdacular !!! Other than that ... I'm in awe ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sounds and scents of the bayou fill my senses when I read you Kate. nicely done. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you kindly Doctor Love Kate thank you Marge hugs to you thank you gentle Donna Kate |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Applauding madly* Spectacular writing!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you kindly amberhues |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am still silent inside. A |
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