Open Poetry #39 |
by candles glow |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
by candles glow did I read you "between the conception and the creation between the emotion and the response falls the shadow" TS Eliot, by candlelight holding the pages within my palms held upwards, honoring the moment when his pen did strike the page, with each phrase striking this bosom as if those lights did flare anew! and in another moment "sunlight on a broken column, there, is a tree swinging and voices are in the wind's singing more distant and more solemn than a fading star" I quietly sip the wine, let my tongue savor the words, and remember it is in the rhythm and structure that the messages of the heart can be felt, in resonance in harmony beyond the cacophony of mere noise. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey Kacy? Kudo's gal, this is brilliant writing. Dang, I could see the glow, feel the warmth of the wine as each word was savored. This is yummie, and definately a . Oh, and btw* it is good to be able to catch you here this evening. Hugs. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I quietly sip the wine, let my tongue savor the words" the words read gently Kacy |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Magnificent, Kacy! In my opinion, this numbers in the top two or three of all you've done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite..yep!! enjoyed your worship here |
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