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themute
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since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-11-13 11:17 PM


I have so many questions now,
Should I stay or should I leave?
Why cant I ever get things right?
Will I ever meet a lover?
Is my heart a broken thing?
Made to flake and fall apart, eaten,
By Novembers moon.
Thought my heart resides in summer.
All my dreams should be fulfilled,
But will a dream blown by the candle
Be smothered by her lips;
They tell me lies, and make me cry,
Will she tell the truth this time?
She said she really couldn’t love me.
Oh what a wonder!  
  


I am the two-toed wanderer

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-11-14 05:02 AM


I hope your heart is not broken for too long.... I liked your words

Be well
Roniece

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-11-14 08:45 AM


eaten, by November's moon

that's cool

yeah, I understand

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