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Open Poetry #39

How Wrong I Was

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-11-13 06:28 PM

How Wrong I Was

Used to think
I'd never take
my old girlfriend back
unless she changed.
Now I think that
she shouldn't come back
unless I change.
Without me changing,
I think she should
choose not too.
If not, than what would
there be for her to
come back too.
I was part of the reason
she held back parts of
herself back from me,
special parts that I
missed a chance to see.
Now everytime I revisit us,
I realize how wrong I was.

JamesLee
11November
2006

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-11-13 07:31 PM

Aww James...

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-11-13 09:15 PM

couldn't have been only you James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-11-13 09:49 PM

I am enjoying your growth

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2006-11-13 11:34 PM

James,
It never hurts to own our share. Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2006-11-14 04:23 AM

exquisitely put James! loved your write

Be well
Roniece

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