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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Forgotten Feelings A shadow rests only in this mind. Reality so time consumed that missing becomes the norm. One wonders when those lost touches become so obsolete that recovery is impossible. The beauty of the past fades as the thrill of those moments surrender to fantasy waiting for the day when all is recovered. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Interesting write. I like it. I can't put my finger on it exactly but something about it draws me in. I would change norm to normal though. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I sure understand this. If only those days would come again, real soon. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am often drawn in too. I like your writing -- it has depth and makes me think. A |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes it is never recovered and it's for the best *sigh* good write M, made me feel this morning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Don't change a thing! This is vintage Maureen! Wonderful  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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