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themute
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0 posted 2006-11-11 04:57 PM


You are more telling than words,
as simple as the cloak of time,
more sound than the oceans whisper,
like the trees of mid-fall-to-spring;
a gift of seasonal wisdom, listen,
there words are such: give in,
fall slow, melt here, pass truly.
Whith such meekness, drowned,
put under value; the beautiful hue.  
Senseing another, senses anew!  

I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-11-11 05:10 PM


Wish I had written this gem. The thoughts and the flow are gorgeous!
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-11-11 05:27 PM



Brevity becomes you...

thank you for the impact.


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-11-11 05:57 PM


Matthew this has to be your best writing so far.
Very well done...beautiful piece.
Heart Hugs

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-11-11 09:25 PM


very romantic!
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