A Silent, Distinct, Whisper

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Open Poetry #39

A Silent, Distinct, Whisper

themute
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-11-11 04:57 PM

You are more telling than words,
as simple as the cloak of time,
more sound than the oceans whisper,
like the trees of mid-fall-to-spring;
a gift of seasonal wisdom, listen,
there words are such: give in,
fall slow, melt here, pass truly.
Whith such meekness, drowned,
put under value; the beautiful hue.
Senseing another, senses anew!

I am the two-toed wanderer

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-11-11 05:10 PM

Wish I had written this gem. The thoughts and the flow are gorgeous!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-11-11 05:27 PM

Brevity becomes you...

thank you for the impact.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-11-11 05:57 PM

Matthew this has to be your best writing so far.
Very well done...beautiful piece.
Heart Hugs

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-11-11 09:25 PM

very romantic!

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