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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
with flick of white tail she bounds silently away followed by her fawn Inspired by: /pip/Forum96/HTML/001609.html Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good one Interloper! just outside the cottage door hoof tracks in the snow. . Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
White snow revealing Track of doe and rabbit feet Peaceful portico |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
like the original that inspired you it's so hold your breath fragile pretty 'loper I love Nancy's and Decaflame's also |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Surprise in brown eyes, she shies in sudden panic, outruns a squirrel. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lifelines of nature Requisite needs seen bounding Barbed wires: worthless |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
My heart in headlights Stare, the glow of moments still While I fall to love Martiwords first brought this inspiration, as teardrop balanced on the edge of a full cup, then this Interloper caused the well to spill. Thank you both.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautifully done. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
 With her trusting eyes the shy doe pierces the heart like a queen of light Beautifully inspiring both, Martie and you. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Look what I just found as deer stills the quivering falling into dark  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, 'deer'. Three days ago, I had responded to this lovely poem after reading the source of your inspiration! But I do not see my comments! I must have exited out before sending the reply. So, I shall write another one! Of course "the one that got away" was bigger and better! lol Anyhoo, it seems to me that Martie's inspiring write has lead to your own inspiring write! Big, warm hugs to each of you! Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thanks to you all, and especially to Martie for her grand inspiration Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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