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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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keeping time standing still in my head the timekeepers hands acheing, strianing to hold time in my memory to me the two of you never grew what I would've done if i had only knew time begins now to tick forward no longer lost in times silent accord kingsangel |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
opps didn't mean to reply to my own..... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Gee, I for one, wouldn’t mind that you “replied” to your own ‘write’ [*grin!*] ..... I accidently ‘double posted’ a reply yesterday (woops!) This poem, to me.... was the second (‘poetic-dejavu’) slice of everyone’s life kind of work I read today! (some typos?!.... but, I IMMEDIATE ‘imaged’ my two children.... BOTH of whom don’t seem to ‘need’ ‘ol dad around anymore!.... my 14 yr. old is 6ft-somethin’ already (he can almost pat ‘ol dad on the head in passin' these days!)....I’m especially gonna’ be thinkin’ ‘bout that last line a lot! Thank you for this interesting ‘write’!! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you for your sweet reply. I am awakening toi alot of awareness lately and i hope it is reflecting in my writing. |
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