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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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have you ever heard a lie told straight from the heart? have you ever hurt so very deep that your soul felt torn apart? have ever stopped to wonder exactly who there was to blame? have you ever caught yourself actually beginning to play their game? did you ever feel another soul burn deep within your own? did you ever wish you were dorothy three taps takes you home? did you ever throw your hands in the air and tell the one you love that you just don't care? have you ever stopped to look yourself straight in the eye? tell me did you know your name? and figure out in the end there is only yourself to blame? kingsangel |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A very insightful piece of writing. A nice work. Thanks for sharing. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
agreeing with Steve, it's an excellent write |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
I looooved the reference to Dorothy. Very clever. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thanks all of you for your replys. I quit writing for a long time and am just picking it up again. Kisses, Julie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
at times I'm glad it wasn't as easy as three taps loved this write! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel, enjoyed this, am pleased that you are back to the pen |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
loved your write - glad that you have taken it up again - we need insightful poets like you!! Be well Roniece |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Julie, A very insightful write. But I feel you are way past that stage by now. Have a wonderful day. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Its good to read you again, and with such an insightful write.  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I loved the Dorothy reference too and the three taps. As I read, though, I just got drawn into your message. It's a good poem. Thank you for sharing. aziza |
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