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Open Poetry #39

Camel Lights

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-11-09 10:11 PM

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It was mutually
One of those occasions
When conversation fails
To be worthy of effect
And the time involved

So with a certain respect
I kept his silence
As he gazed at the trees—
It still seemed after all
A place he would know
Better than I

The smoke from our cigarettes
Mingled with the leaves
That fell so slowly
Through the morning air

We looked at the old houses
Still mute in their sleep
Where are you going I asked
As he quietly began to fade

Oh the same place as you
He said with his eyes
You’ll find out soon enough
When you get there

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Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

1 posted 2006-11-09 11:43 PM

"Day breaks turtle dove speaks out which way are you going? Not now little turtle dove must you scold me?? I woke to fuind my lover on his bed and my heart was sweet to excess!!!"
Who was that again!!! I can't remember..

I loved the poem....I could visual every verse!!! Awesome!! KA

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-11-10 09:08 AM

Well done

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-25 01:38 PM

still, God.

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