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miscellanea
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0 posted 2006-11-08 09:34 PM



In a pretzel is negative space and  
Positive just as well,  and at times
I seem all twisted
In challenges that seem to swell;
The life of yeast is growing,
Shall I bake the bread or yell?

Now, what kind of question is that
To one with an appetite?
Simple solution to bake the bread,
And, in challenge  take delight,
offer it up and all around
Pass it for a bite.

Maybe …
with some wine!


        ~miscellanea

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (11-09-2006 07:47 PM).]

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1 posted 2006-11-08 09:46 PM


thanks for the smile
miscellanea
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2 posted 2006-11-08 09:50 PM


Dixie,

   You are quite welcome!  Glad you enjoyed...

cathy

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3 posted 2006-11-08 10:08 PM


A very witty little write misc !!
Like the way you think & enjoyed this.
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

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4 posted 2006-11-08 10:22 PM


Chris,

   So glad you liked it.  Poetry is my "garlic to ward off on-coming stress!" Hmmm.   That is metaphor is food for thought.  Think I'll drum up something with that.  Thanks for the inspiration.
  

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5 posted 2006-11-09 05:27 PM


I would like to ditto Chris's reply! ~ and I enjoyed your response to it!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda


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6 posted 2006-11-09 06:38 PM


Much enjoyed Cathy!
Maybe pass the after dinner wine..not whine. LOL.
I really like the flavour of this one!

Hugs~Nancy

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