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howardtsu
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0 posted 2006-11-08 08:08 PM



your words were hot with criticism

can i cool you down with witicism?

you're the most pretty prism

             i've ever seen

but the vandalism

               of my heart

since you left my Shakespear scene

               is unbearable



                                                 love,

                                                 howard


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just out of reach
1 posted 2006-11-08 08:21 PM


awesome play of words !
much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

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