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Open Poetry #39

Its came around

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2006-11-08 11:34 AM

There was a space between breaths
an endless time since we had met
I Let you go
you had to know

And now its come back round

'I made mistakes' i said out loud
But what was i, a voice in a crowd?
Its been so long
and so long gone

And now its come back round

What did i ever do to deserve?
Who did i ever mean to hurt?
I had you here
Once so near

And now its come back round

The world has come full circle
I'm at the bottom once again
Your so high
Up in the sky

And now its come back round

I kissed the air that held you
To taste a forgotten life
But its gone
Just too long

And i'm gonna wait for it to come around again.

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

1 posted 2006-11-08 02:41 PM

I really like this.

Rae

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-11-09 07:49 PM

tender
may the wait
and the weight
be bearable

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-11-09 09:15 PM

precious

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

4 posted 2006-11-10 01:05 AM

this reflects something I have been through lately. very thoughtfilled and deep! Thanks for sharing. Julie

kingsangel

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2006-11-10 02:15 PM

good 'slice of ALL our lives' write!....
[that "love's-dejavu" feelin'...been there; done that!].....

For me, the following was particularly excellent!:

"I kissed the air that held you
To taste a forgotten life
But its gone
Just too long"

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