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Sprintime in The Valley
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Sprintime in The Valley |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Springtime In The Valley A spring time drive in the valley In wine tasting we partake As black swans glide gracefully At the vineyard by the lake Row upon row of gnarled wood Grapes hung from the vine Huge green and purple bunches Soon to be bottles of wine Down the steps into the cellars With wooden casks stored We are offered samples of wine Sweet and dry was poured Having our tastebuds tantalised With the best food and wine In the lakeside garden resturant We relaxed in the sunshine Hope ©2006 Link the the poem with corresponding graphics below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/102/poem_8373873.html |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
~ I really liked the rhyming scheme... smooth and melodic. Also, this reminded me of Spring, which would be nice right about now living here in Pittsburgh. One more thing, your words reminded me of that Oscar worthy movie in 2005 about wine making - Sideways. Enjoyed! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Makes me want to be there  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks so much for your comments in reply , if you happen to check the link with the graphics , thats exactly where I was last week-end Hope |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Such a lovely tribute to a memory that you obviously cherish. It is a fun poem to read and you transported me to wine country. I had never been before. Thank you. A |
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