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Open Poetry #39

apologies and amends

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2006-11-07 06:24 PM

                 Lone knights

            [on ‘right-living’ and
               social impotence]

    [ a profound ‘apology’ from one sad
    ‘weaver’ of second-hand dreams to
     a lovely, lost lass in Scotland....
     and to all the Celtic and Native
     (true) American peoples who have
     born only bitter injustice at the
     hands of any and all those evil men!]

Though no one man can make amends
[for hurt...pain....ALL that ‘offends’....
to every lovely lady who has ever cried
because the cruel and selfish lied.
For all the peoples who have been disgraced
used....abused....by greed displaced....
Please know, at least....I too have deeply cried...
and lived...and fought...and always tried
to walk...and teach...a very ‘different way’
of how all men should live each day!....
and from your spirits the ‘shackles’ pry
for even one such chance.....
I would gladly die!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-11-07 06:58 PM

"Please know, at least....I too have deeply cried...
and lived...and fought...and always tried
to walk...and teach...a very ‘different way’
of how all men should live each day!...."

Very nice work Sir.
I especially love the above lines
I am so pleased you have joined us.
Hugs~Nancy

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-17 07:04 PM

very beautiful and strong minded and kind hearted.

good and beautiful again.

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