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A Day's Confine
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A Day's Confine |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Day's Confine It takes a turn, a twist of fate Reflecting now on future, late With midnight dreams, those once displaced A verse from eyes in search of, faced With missions skyed, desires reach To bridge that gap designed in teach. Leaving behind the tragic of Life's lessons ribboned, touched by love Of more than self, a less of kind A shaking up, exiled in mind. A challenge here, be challenged there Gifted each to weather where The storms that blind and tend in doubt Move on and leave the in when out. A twist of words, those thoughts combined Leave footprints in the left behind. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
" A twist of words, those thoughts combined Leave footprints in the left behind." I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
I could say the timing of my own reading of this poem, made it even more touching to my heart. Such beauty, especially when one can relate, or to have escaped depression and discovered happiness once more a great feeling Christopher a poet who cares |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
M VEry nice indeed and touching. I loved it Rich |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Maureen, your words never cease to make me whisper "ahhhh". hugs, Chris "Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Wow you twisted and turned simple words into a simply darling poem. Rae |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
it's almost a dance...alone or with a friend, but I can hear the music too. Cheers Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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