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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
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0 posted 2006-11-06 10:57 PM


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Enmity of Adore
07 November 2006


Do we love, or forget love was real.
As if the controlling interest was a business,
and the playing cards of the deck
were stacked to deal.


Do we take away life, and say love was dead.
Do we know of hunger, those often not fed.
Was there colour in our cheeks, or sex appeal.
When most of all, loves desire was good,
in our ways of this affection to seal.


Some would know marriage,
others would, but relate to pain.
But love could be baseball,
although that was sport in way of game.


The pitcher, the batter,
and the short-stop too,
Do we know love, and its ways,
through and through.


For when found and discovered,
even true love could still be lost.
Just to know of love, in ways of amour,
this was a richness, a flavour, this enmity of adore.




"Having abolished in his flesh the enmity, even the law of
commandments contained in ordinances; for to make
in himself of twain one new man, so making peace;
And that he might reconcile both unto God in one body
by the cross, having slain the enmity thereby:"
Ephesians 2: 15-16 KJV



© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)


a poet who cares



© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2006-11-08 04:35 PM


Now this is nice - sincere, poetic and short. Very well done.

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-11-08 04:57 PM


Some times it is what is behind the words of the poem that makes it real.

Thank you for adding your comment above

Christopher

a poet who cares

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