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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-11-06 11:45 AM




Desire
Fire smoldering
Two hearts beating as one
Becoming lost in a moment
Lingering in passions sweetest embrace
Mesmerized by softest whispers
Touching deep within soul
Tenderly caught
Desire.



seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-11-06 11:53 AM

Now, I DO like this.
You just KNOW I do

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-11-06 11:57 AM

I am so pleased that you enjoyed my first attempt at this rictameter thing Loper, thanks so much.  HUGS!!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-11-06 12:17 PM

Excellent one Donna!  I love it!
Marge most recently talked me into trying that form.
They are fun to work with.
Hugs~Nancy

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hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.
                                    

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-11-06 12:22 PM

very nicely done!
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-11-06 12:42 PM

ms gs, enjoyed this one
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just out of reach
6 posted 2006-11-06 03:51 PM

Well Done Donna !!!
Much enjoyed,
hugs, Chris

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The Lady
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7 posted 2006-11-06 04:13 PM


so pretty
gentle Donna
iliana
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8 posted 2006-11-06 05:04 PM

  Great job, Donna!  *hugs*...jo
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9 posted 2006-11-06 05:36 PM

Donna...It might be your first attempt, but it is a very very good one. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

secondhanddreampoet
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10 posted 2006-11-07 06:09 PM

I am only a tiny (ever-most-humble) unknown 'poetic voice'....and, perhaps a somewhat 'biased' (dangerously)'incurable romantic'...but, in my opinion this poem is superb!....and also based on others I have (so far) read by this same author,....I believe she has a fine 'poetic Voice'! I grandly look forward to readin' much more of her work!
PEBBLES
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11 posted 2006-11-07 06:54 PM

I love this.Truly fascinating. Im not familiar with the terminology. I'll do some research. Thank's Helen.
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