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exhale
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0 posted 2006-11-06 04:15 AM


I don't make the lines
I bluuurrr them
read between the lies
black and white
I am bigger than this body
I am bigger than this world
I am here to grow
I am here to be

there is no small pond
only
small thoughts
I am bigger than this body
if words make a symphony
I am here to charm the largest snake
with nothing but a string of words
to wrap around a mind
so tight
so addictive
let my stories be yours
and infinite
let my stories carry me
till I no longer can

big fish
need no water
to swim for miles

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-06 09:47 AM


sounds like an awesome attitude
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-11-06 10:18 AM


exhale
It's not the exhale but the inhale that get to me. LOL Enjoyed

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just out of reach
3 posted 2006-11-06 10:20 AM


Your writing just gets better each time I read a piece of your work !
Much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-11-06 12:47 PM


You are not a big fish in a small pond,
you are a fish that needs no pond

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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