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themute
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0 posted 2006-11-05 04:47 PM



Last night I dreamt of caramel,
I dreamt of you;
You and your use of men as lovers;
Your use of me as a friend.
Caramel-smiles.

I am the two-toed wanderer

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-11-05 05:26 PM


sounds like sweet dreams to me
Aeris Nicole
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2 posted 2006-11-05 05:41 PM


short and sweet.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-11-05 05:59 PM


and if caramel
is not your preferred taste
perhaps
a sticky situation

themute
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4 posted 2006-11-05 06:11 PM


Your pun/innuendo is three fold to my message. I love it!

I am the two-toed wanderer

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-11-05 06:14 PM


Sweet smiles..
not a sweet situation to be in.

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.
                                    

seraphin
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6 posted 2006-11-05 11:41 PM


Another sampling of yet one more side of you.

Wonderful.

Sandra

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