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Open Poetry #39
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-11-04 02:29 PM

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That bright light
Of the autumn sun

Just above
The rim
Of dark clouds

Is like God
Come down

To say
It’s alright
Ok
Try again

Here’s
Another life


.

[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (11-05-2006 07:38 PM).]
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-11-04 11:42 PM

Nice write, John.
marcel
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az, usa
2 posted 2006-11-05 10:13 PM

simple but powerful and inspiring....
Huan Yi
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3 posted 2006-11-06 07:53 PM


Thank you both

John
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4 posted 2007-04-20 01:42 PM

!!!!
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