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Another world. (Tanka)
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Another world. (Tanka) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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.  . Murky fish haven Weedbeds conceal bass, perch, pike Beneath the surface Thus avoiding angler's lures The bay's underwater world. . |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, There is a world within a world there. Thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedPhotographer~ Fantasmatical !!! *Huglets*:huglets: ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Below, is as above...a haven. Enjoy these alternative views. TD  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome write Nancy Lee & the pic goes so well with your words. hugs & miss ya!! |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
beautiful! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The secret world revealed..thank you Nancy.. Goldenrose. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
By crickey, that's good! Rae |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is fantastic, Nancy. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Trying to stay safe ... above and below! Very nice approach to "another" world, dear Nancy! love and joy. Marhgerita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nance~ The music festival was FUN ! Talk at ya' tomorrow~ And a REAL *HUGLET*  for good measure~~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
awesome Nancy |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very creative write Tinker!! Good time of the year to chase the muskie!! I'll bring the bait..you find the fish. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have a fish tank I enjoy looking at sometimes this poem makes me wish I was a fish |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Thank you so much everyone for reading and replying to my work. It is so very much appreciated. Glad you liked the pic as well.. seeing that I almost fell out of the boat to get it. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
i think there is something fishy about this arthur |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Arthur? C'mere!  No spring, nor summer beauty |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
ain't misbehavin' just lookin' at fish haven a tanka maven ~*~ I know they aren't supposed to rhyme, but it was FUN anyhow Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good one Interloper! Thank you! |
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