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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2006-11-04 11:05 AM

"I don't know what happened"
that's a sorry thing to say
after eleven years knowing you
and now I just fade away.

The lights shine different now
and the songs plays slower,
you call at three in the morning
when the temperature is lower.

I'm reminded of nights by fires
of love and laughter and desires,
you talk so grand and passionately
of times that were, what used to be.

But I no longer live there,
within the confines of yesterday-
you ask me what happened,
why I fade away,

honestly

"I don't know"
is all I can say.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-11-04 12:17 PM

Another great poem from you Dixie..another poem i enjoy peeping into your life..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-11-04 12:18 PM

And even if your heart knows, you might not be able to verbalize it.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-11-04 01:19 PM

You write of a love fading...
I know this feeling...well done Dixie gal!
Hugs~

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2006-11-04 03:12 PM

Well done Dixiedoodlegirl !!
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2006-11-04 07:12 PM

quote:
But I no longer live there,
within the confines of yesterday-
you ask me what happened,
why I fade away,

Good, that you live in the Now, dear Dixie! Very well rendered feelings.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

6 posted 2006-11-04 08:44 PM

Very good -- much enjoyed.

A

sewasham
Senior Member

since 2006-09-11

Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

7 posted 2006-11-04 10:40 PM

Sometimes things just change don't they? Another fine work. Take care and Have fun. Steve

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

8 posted 2006-11-05 12:31 PM

I have a feelin' you didn't fade away at all, but expanded beyond someone's view of you Bravo! It's strange how we are expected not to change in life-changing situatons.

~ Klassy

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-11-05 02:13 AM

a beauty Dixie...

hard not to ask those questions
you're right though
now is the time
that matters

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

10 posted 2006-11-05 10:05 AM

This was amazing!
(Can't come up with a better word right now)
It's funny how you can just wake up one day and realize that things are no longer the same.

Very nice!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2006-11-05 08:28 PM

Change is good...James

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