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Rebellion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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red flags are going up everywhere still I keep crossing the lines I suppose I like the pain of playing with fire and ignoring the signs jumping over hot coals of chaos barefoot diving in riptides laying somewhere in between where rebellion collides head-on with morals and that is where I live that is where I am alive where I smile when you can't forgive and life goes on for both of us how sad there's no "we" I am breathing air of you thinning yet I cannot see to ever agree that I needed you like you needed me. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love your writing. It is interesting and it changes .. but it always intrigues me. You have me captured with your words -- and I like it. aziza |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Great write, just draws you in and holds you right to the end! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Alison, thank you. This is an old poem. More and more I find I am posting old ones just to be able to have something for others to read. Maybe I'll get rid of this writer's block soon. Eddie, good to see you my friend. Thanks for stopping by! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I am breathing air of you thinning" great lines Dixie writer's block is rough but it does finally go away in the meantime I enjoyed this poem... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed... Writers block is God giving you a vacation...James |
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