Open Poetry #39 |
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TA-TAS |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
TA-TAS Her hair in the mirror was dense with the scramble of night remember she told her face children grow and picket fences they get old Lively lust what could that be if you had your cup of tea and beer in the evening what matter destiny slip into this shirt and see I look pretty good to me In a primitive back corner safe her thoughts could not be bought they were hers and to her belonged like a belt she could put on and change the way she felt to strong It was a powerful tool but there was more to this than that for sometimes thoughts need some help in order to be really felt She’s wearing a black t-shirt tight and printed on the front in white is SAVE THE TA-TAS with a pink ribbon curl between one ta and the other breast she’s ready to count who reads her chest ---------- ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amen! Martie, this touches |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie A delight to read. ![]() ![]() |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Martie, yay! You are a wonder with your thoughts. So glad you share them. I love your style!...and by the way, you look beautiful! Hugs, Karen |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poetry is always touching and it has many faces ~ as do your photos! ~ I especially like this one! You are such a pretty poetess! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
An excellent write Martie.. and yes, I love this photo the best too! ![]() Hugs~Nancy No spring, nor summer beauty |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Certainly uniquely written, it has Martie written all over it, i would read her chest..LOL..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Cute and profound, dear Martie, quite a deed! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
I enjoyed this and I am embarassed to say I would be one of the numbers who read the shirt. Lol. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, Sis.... the actuality of this is too true we take so much for granted, and when the granted doesn't take us... then we have to fight for what is left... never be satisfied for what is... and never, ever, be taken for granted!.... let along, diagnoses... always get a second opinion.... it may be that I am just getting older friends as I enjoy my every new day.... but I have learned, that unconditionally, we must be aware of our surroundings, even to the very core of us Thank you for this wonderful, and thoughtful, enlightening. ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bodacious ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - your do write images so very well - Paul |
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