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Erotic Sky Songs |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Ebony swallows erotic songs of the sky Stars fall on lover’s embrace Aria flows from Milky Way’s thighs Ebony swallows erotic songs of the sky Blackness blankets lustful surprise Planets hide to cover their face Ebony swallows erotic songs of the sky Stars fall on lover’s embrace aziza |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
very nice, shuga ... you should try a villanelle  ~*Sheli*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, do try a villanelle but stay off the hard stuff LOL |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
go for the villanelle aziza you've got what it takes... love this |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do agree with the others...and I do like how you weaved all of the pieces together. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza You sew a goodly needle. squeeze: |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, enjoyed this slice of your mind |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely done indeed.  No spring, nor summer beauty |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
mmm VERY nice Aziza....enjoyed listening to your song very much! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very good, indeed. What do you mix with villanelle? Is it strong Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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