Open Poetry #39 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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I shatter to pieces right in front of me and I'm in no mood for silly reverie. The world crumbles around me I don't try to conceal it and if I still love you I don't know, I don't feel it. Leave a message after the tone leave your card, leave me alone leave the light on when you leave so I can see what I've always known and when I finish reconstruction you might come back around by then and maybe I'll be strong enough to be able to feel for you again. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You did it again. Caught me, hooked me and enticed me to come back to read again ... and I am so happy that I did. You are just getting better and better -- and your writing has always been good in my opinion. aziza |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I've missed reading you since I've been MIA. You've got some kinda inner strength chickadee, and it's shining through more and more ![]() ~*S*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dixie...I don't see you shattering, I see you getting stronger every poem!! ![]() |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Dixie , you are building a stronger you Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows And if you shattered which would be the lucky piece? Good write enjoyed. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Alison, I think you are my biggest fan and i like that! Thank you! I think you and I have lots in common. Sheli, I'm glad to see you back around, I understand life gets in the way sometimes. You've been missed Martie, thanks so much! I know I'm in one piece but some days just make me feel like I'm falling apart...and then tomorrow comes ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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Hope, thank you my friend...and I see you are doing well on your construction too ![]() Sy, pick a piece, any piece I'm sure there's a little luck in all of them ![]() |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh yes this one grabbed me Dixie I like your reconstruction... |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Oh yes, I know how this feels. I've been there and have come out the other side. Leave a message after the tone leave your card, leave me alone leave the light on when you leave so I can see what I've always known I would just add ... That a life lived with you Is a life lived alone. To thy own self be true |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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