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Open Poetry #39

submerged

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2006-11-03 08:25 PM

Magenta hues
submerged themselves
in midnight blues,
as fireflies sparkled
in love's starlight dust.
Ebony surrounded us
while crickets echoed
our heart beat dreams
in surround sound
upon the still night air.

But you were never really here
except in my dreams,
to share your cascading rhythms,
your passionate Ziljian pearls,
Love's heartbeat.
Our splendid harmony
became cacophony,
and I am now submerged,
in midnite blues
embracing the silence
of ebony.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2006-11-03 10:19 PM

this is gorgeous!

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
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2 posted 2006-11-04 11:43 PM

I love how you use words -- and I see a picture created from your word brush ... A lovely picture that enfolds me.

"Love's heartbeat.
Our splendid harmony
became cacophony,
and I am now submerged,
in midnite blues
embracing the silence
of ebony."

I enjoy your talent.

A

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2006-11-04 11:52 PM

Dixie, thanks!
And aziza, thank you so much for your kind reply.

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