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SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
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0 posted 2006-11-02 11:53 PM


The loneliness creeps in again,
as my mind fills with doubt.
Pain is back from its temporary leave,
well rested and prepared.
I feel so empty,
yet I'm back in my familiar world.
Darkness encumbers me,
I was standing,
now I'm down.
I want more than anything,
to feel permanently free of this weight I carry.
It hides in the shadows of my happiest days.
Waiting, watching.
I've been waiting too.
for something, anything to set it off.
The pain is back,
the vacation was so long.
I had hoped the strings were severed,
but to hope is to want too much.
The bags are unpacked,
its here to stay, for now.
I prepare for battle once again
against an enemy that will never die.

© Copyright 2006 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
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1 posted 2006-11-04 11:30 PM


I feel so inadequate -- I can't think of a response worthy of what you wrote.  I did read and I did feel -- and I won't easily forget your poem.

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