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Open Poetry #39
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FNG
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since 2006-02-07
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0 posted 2006-09-08 05:11 AM

I'm broken.

Pounded and pounded.

by

fist of misunderstandings,
words of distrust.

Slashed and slashed.

by

blades of gossips,
anguish of jealously.

Strangled and strangled.

by

ropes of intolerant,
midget room for an open mind.
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-09-08 06:26 AM

I find that even happens in the "real" world...

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sandgrain
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2 posted 2006-09-08 08:51 PM

Very well expressed.

   Rae
FNG
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since 2006-02-07
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3 posted 2006-09-08 10:02 PM

Hi nakdthoughts, sandgrain.

thank you for reading and your comments
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