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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-11-03 12:11 PM


Reincarnated from a soul,
made beautiful by deeds
of a lifetime, warm,
thoughtful, loving, now metamorphosed
into the nonsuch of
a singing robin; burning
scarlet like the blood
of futile human wars.

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2006-11-03 12:20 PM


Very descriptive write Phil.
Love the colors in this one..well done!
Hugs~Nancy

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.
                                    

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-11-03 12:29 PM


a splash of scarlet
nurtures the heart
when from love
not war

thank you, Phil

lightkeeper
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pluto
3 posted 2006-11-03 03:17 PM


  xxx phil xxx

A scarlet warmth that never turns cold or  needlessly spilt.... will always be music to my ears.

   simply  beautiful
             Love Bea xxx

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2006-11-03 05:42 PM


wow.  I like the brevity and depth in this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-11-03 06:52 PM




thoughtful and colorful
I love this thought

"now metamorphosed
into the nonsuch of
a singing robin"


Martie
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6 posted 2006-11-03 07:51 PM


Phil....I was enchanted by this.
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2006-11-04 11:46 AM


The poem is exquisite in its entirety, however, I find the following lines to be  most memorable:

"Reincarnated from a soul,
made beautiful by deeds
of a lifetime"  

Thank you, Poet Phil, for sharing your soul thoughts.

Loving Light,

Linda


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8 posted 2006-11-16 08:32 PM



Philip, I landed on this indeedful poem
as if a robin in need of a worm...

and such a banquet!  Thank you for
sharing this lovely!


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9 posted 2006-11-16 09:46 PM



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