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um_idk
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 32
minnesota

0 posted 2006-11-02 04:18 PM



Im sorry mamma
for everything
i no i should of helped you
but back then i wasnt sure what to do
i just stood there screamin and cryin
knowin you were dyin
mamma the nightmares wont stop
in my mind its always at the top
i still feel the hate i felt
and remember the fear io felt
most of all i hate myself
more then god himself
i love you mom
i just had to im sorry
and tell you how just i felt

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writergrl
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since 2006-10-30
Posts 73
Las Vegas, Nevada
1 posted 2006-11-02 05:06 PM


for sure your mother has forgiven you; that's what mothers do...very poignant and moving piece, thank you for sharing.

"You cannot stain a black coat."
Nicholas Nickleby

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 2006-11-02 05:13 PM


Your piece really touched me as my late daughter left 3 teens.  I rarely see them and when I do they don't talk about her.  It's so important to get your feelings out.

Doesn't every child go through tough times with their mom?  I did, yet I loved her so deeply.

  God bless,
     Rae

um_idk
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 32
minnesota
3 posted 2006-11-08 01:39 AM


thanx much

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