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JosephF
Junior Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 30

0 posted 2006-09-02 06:26 AM

The Ending of an Era,
The autumn months remain as my twilight years,
I can picture you in my mind,
Looking into my eyes with yours.

An orchard of oak,
The orange scene beyond me,
The mix of ageing colours,
With yourself, standing before me,
Venus in her true form, Aphrodite lives on.

It has been so long and empty,
I cannot remember the soft touch of your lips,
Your Exquisite aroma,
Your hand on passing down my cheek,
Or the moment we first embraced with a kiss.

To share one last embrace,
To feel your silk lips on mine once again.

This is how I spend my days,
Dreaming of a dwindling hope,
That gets further away as I run towards it.

The autumn scene is a dream,
Thought up by my imagination,
As our past memories fade into nothingness

But there is still life in this seemingly dead world,
It’s when I see you, talk to you and hear you.
Life, which is given a boost by your smile, and happiness.

Even if, with the extraordinary power of the mind, we can never, be together.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-09-02 08:51 AM

This is how I spend my days,
Dreaming of a dwindling hope,
That gets further away as I run towards it.

The autumn scene is a dream,
Thought up by my imagination,
As our past memories fade into nothingness

~*~

Enjoying your male point of view, Poet. Thank you for this beautiful and sensitive poem.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-09-02 09:00 AM

Welcome to Passions JosephF.
Strong write, wrapped in emotional tenderness.
TD

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2006-09-02 09:15 AM

"This is how I spend my days,
Dreaming of a dwindling hope,
That gets further away as I run towards it."

Well said and many can relate. Enjoyed this heart write!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2006-09-02 09:48 AM

Beautiful!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2006-09-02 03:26 PM

"This is how I spend my days,
Dreaming of a dwindling hope,
That gets further away as I run towards it."

~ Not a pleasant situation. I've been there and thank God-ness, those days have passed ~ and I hope they soon will, for you.

A touching, emotive piece of writing.

Loving Light,
EA

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2006-09-02 06:08 PM

What a simply wonderful write! I hope to read more from you soon.

~Alli~

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