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Open Poetry #39

Loving a life

yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27

Posts 52
california

0 posted 2006-09-02 03:09 AM

you gave me life you held me tight those years soon past way to fast was your love true am a really supposed to believe you, you were out of my life and u built up a great strife you took my heart and tore it apart you left me alone in this world unknown where nobody has shown me where to go I see in my friends the experience Ive missed I pray to god every night that your alright I still sit wondering how different I might be with your mothering you never really were there for me not that you wanted to be, do u ever stop to think all the nights Ive cried wishing you were still by my side longing for a memories of when you still loved me but every time I try tears form in my eye how could you ever say you love me with all your heart when your the one who tore me apart your love only lasted till I was three its only a vague memory You left me in pieces and the pain only increases I wish I could go back to that life when you held me tight and whispered to me that everything would be alright.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2006-09-02 04:38 AM

yvetters_24, Oh dear, I had first read this and followed it with Out of The Mist by Earth Angel. What a sad read when putting both together. good writing. Keep on. martyjo

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2006-09-02 10:26 AM

Good writing!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-09-02 10:33 AM

I'd be lying if I were to say I did not have a lump in my throat and tears welling in my eyes as I read your exceptionally moving words.

In divine time, yv, everything WILL be all right. It's the way of the Universe.

Wrapping my arms around you,
EA

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2006-09-02 06:07 PM

Oh, wow, what a very emotional write.
Just know that everything will get better. Hang in there.

~Alli~

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