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Dear Lady, I understand
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Dear Lady, I understand |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643
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Dear Lady My goodbyes nonchalantly are masked to keep A calmer me tears shed in lattes leave nothing your nights will walk in my absence but I understand. I understand. speak nothing of worry tell your children angels will guide them till you and I meet again years ago another place my hand held yours in sorrow we lived sisterly in whites chiffon dresses coming out for the world to see sadness will creep beneath your braided hair and I will always understand I understand |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I like this one. It felt quiet and warm. The repetition worked well. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
thank you so much pilgrimage |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Albeit a quiet understanding meant for two... you share well. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a lovely understanding Monklet I love it... |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
wonderful... I am so thrilled you both enjoyed it....!!!  |
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