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A ring upon a finger
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A ring upon a finger |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland 
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A ring upon a finger; Your crystallized delight Left springing epithalamium. It was the day, We were two children, Our dramatic affair. My most fleeting moment, Told away by a knocking, Quickly recognized, Lust. Peering toward oblivion On the brightest dusking sun, I’ll be beaten not again. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your words are pleasing to ones eyes and heart. i enjoy~ ever hear of the two toed wonderer who plays and sings, i only saw him once, amazing, he has no arms, your name ttw, makes me think of him. My spirit will rise |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Matt, This radiates your usual high quality. But then, I never expect anything less of you. Sandra |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
I really liked it. as always, your expression is perfect... excellent work. as i said in my poem 'one hundred smiles' you sure make my days better, thanks for sharing! |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
Groves, i have seen -i belive- the two toed wonder, and it is pretty amazing to watch. Thank you for the words, it means something. Sandra, your complements are always flattering as hell, its always wonderful to hear from you. Dreamer, my words arn't perfect, i think they are good, but they arn't yet where i'd like. My goal is the mastering of my self expression, this will not be easy and it won't be soon. Your words are encouraging none the less, thank you. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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