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. . . Treasures . . . Senryu string |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
inaccessible you are just beyond my grasp infuriating ~*~ glide into my arms rejuvenating passion soaring in our love ~*~ hushed for but a while desire cannot be contained unmanageable ~*~ disorderly love enfolded in your embrace turmoil and bedlam ~*~ uncontrollable passionate fascination craving satisfied ~*~ leaving memories everlasting guiding lights treasures of the mind Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sounds are sizzling Each little treasure so warm Handle carefully  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Decaflame ~ tenderly touching the firestorm you have become fearing consumption Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper You covered the subject very well. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Grin... I still say, there is something to be said for holding at the crest...giggle. Beautiful write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy ~ Thanx for the coverage  TD ~ Yore causing me to blush, BIG TIME! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH SIGH!! These are SO beautiful!! Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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writergrl Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 73Las Vegas, Nevada |
Hi interloper, I'm new here but wanted to comment on your lovely poem...it is well constructed and filled with rich imagery and emotion. Well done! I shall return to read more of your work. write on, writergrl |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Currents are humming Electricity flowing Continue sizz'lin... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nancy ~ You are too nice, Enchanted One writergrl ~ Wow! I am honored that you made your first post in the blue pages on my work. Thank you! Decaflame ~ AC or DC there is voltage aplenty energy abounds Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"desire cannot be contained" ouch! don't even try I would follow this string anywhere... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
no I am not lost I am just a breath away never to be far |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The Lady ~ Think we can find a way to bottle it and market it Helen ~ I have missed your comments ... lovers find a way to breathe life into their love their nearness helpful Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
impressive! |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
loverly, Interloper thanks for the nudge  ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
This comes quite close to my heart. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I feel the warming from the words of a love songs state of combustion [This message has been edited by Martie (10-31-2006 12:21 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
passing shadows ~ Aw shux, ma'am Sheli ~ Hey, LOOK everybody! Sheli's back themute ~ Then my words have become meaningful. Thank you. martie ~ What a 1derful write. It's not nice to make my work look shabby  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Shivering slightly yet sudden words of passion cause my heart to melt Love, Margherita |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Margherita ~ skin erupts at touch passion follows as quickly triphammer heartbeat Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Passion floods the hearts eyes lose focus on the world what remains is Love Love, Margherita |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
love overflowing created by synergy the math of we two Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
within each heart beat lies seeds of eternity love will make them grow |
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