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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Foibles Foibles of humanity Carpet mans insanity From the valleys of inane To the mountains of insane Children playing ego games Throwing logs upon the flames Chasing through the fog and mist Tossing flowers at exist Dreaming dreams of evermore Boring holes within the core Bouncing echoes of a thought Empty hands with nothing caught Tears that flow with salty brine Hearts with symbols mark the shrine Crying in an empty waste Bitter is the empty taste Illusive is the true of goal Each day the dew that wets my soul |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Bouncing echoes of a thought' You did ... and I caught it !! Happy WeenerHowl, my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Happy holiday and have fun.  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Oh! those bonfires of the heart, aspiring flames, a child's art innocent in expectancy, visions young we wished to see ~ That dance of light makes radiant room where petals soft be not consumed or trapped in time's rusty looms, the promise of those velvet blooms. ~ Klassy Lassy (morning, Sy...  ) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Powerful write Sy. The imagery is wonderful. Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most excellent write Sy! Have a funtastic day!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"empty hands with nothing caught" WOW Sey, this rolls off the tongue so easily and the thoughts layed out in this one are perfectly executed. Sir, you ROCK, this is one of my favorites of yours. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy Lassy Inspiring, thank you sweet. scorpio Thank you, thank you, thank you. Nancy, And a happpy halloween to you.  Gentle Spirit And you are a favorite of mine. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, Seymour... especially the first verse! *S* Excellent!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern How can I thank you. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sy, you can foil my bull any day!   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame Very sweet of you. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
"Chasing through the fog and mist Tossing flowers at exist" Your the man! Omnia vincit amor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pressie Thank you for the lovely Comp. |
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