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pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-09-07 05:57 PM

Possibilities lie ahead
Happiness accompanied by dread
What I’ll do and who I’ll be
Where I’ll go and who I’ll see
Some tell me-
I’m better than the rest
That there’s no need for this distress
But I strongly disagree
For you see
It’s only me
No one else
On this road
I walk
By myself
Without love
Lonely
And
Alone

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2006-09-07 06:28 PM

Just a matter of time, my friend...

j.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-09-07 06:38 PM

love begins with a friendship...
and develops by way of caring and
sharing and forgiveness and acceptance...
time and effort....
no shortcuts...
James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-09-07 07:34 PM

Feeling the sadness in this,
with a tint of underlying hope.
Possibilities, always exist, even when we can't always see them.

Nicely penned.

arwen54
Junior Member

since 2006-09-07

Posts 13
Welland, Ontario

4 posted 2006-09-07 09:09 PM

you won't be alone for long, I'll warrant

heartfelt words...
there is always hope...

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2006-09-08 04:04 PM

My heart feels for you! there is sunshine on a cloudy day!

~ARH

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

6 posted 2006-09-08 11:31 PM

enjoyed.

yeah, that says about even if we become someone up there, it gets overwhelming to be alone, even with success.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

7 posted 2006-09-08 11:53 PM

All roads have intersections . . .
enter them with care

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2006-09-27 09:28 AM

That feeling ends.....

"some tell me-"

and I hope it does for you. Writing it out is one of the best things a poet has going, when life brings that to us.... So get t'writin, kiddo -- I wanna see more of your stuff!

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2006-09-27 10:36 AM

I know exactly how this is

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

10 posted 2006-09-27 11:20 AM

Concise and to the point... I like it. Then I always a fan of the more depressing poetry.

"We all know Major Tom's a junkie"

Ashes to Ashes - David Bowie

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

11 posted 2006-09-27 11:46 AM

This was cool how you brought the last lines down to more and more quick and simple terms, as they projected the loneliness.

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