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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-10-30 04:42 PM


Yobo


I was rubbing the wrong legs.
Whispering in the wrong ear.
Kissing the wrong lips.
Things were not as
they appeared.

I was totally out of control.

If there was to be any hope
I had to learn when
to walk away,
and how to
embrace the
concept of
letting go.


JamesLee
29October
2006



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Mr. Omniscient
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1 posted 2006-10-30 04:48 PM


Good point!
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2 posted 2006-10-30 08:57 PM


yeah *sigh*
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3 posted 2006-10-31 12:31 PM




nicely done James!

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4 posted 2006-10-31 12:35 PM


Enjoyed this one, JamesLee!  *hugs*...jo
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-01-02 11:06 PM


Thank you all for the wonderful responses...James
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