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Open Poetry #39

LO.............VE

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2006-10-30 02:49 PM

In out
Just breath
Whatever it takes
Please believe

I’m here
On your path
And I won't
Stop at half

So please
Don’t let go
And let your
Heart show

I’ll take it
Journey with me
Now and forever
Held for entirety

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2006-10-30 03:56 PM

An interesting write

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mr. Omniscient
Member

since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

2 posted 2006-10-30 04:06 PM

I agree... Nice style.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-10-30 05:52 PM

nice work Deep_Inside

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-10-30 09:03 PM

nice one

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